Completed Snow White Stories

Snow White and Princess Ichiro - by Tyler

     Once upon a time there was a girl named Princess Ichiro and her evil baseball coach.  They lived at the bottom of Mariner's stadium.  Her evil baseball coach said "let's go for a walk".  She was so pretty that the coach captured her and brought her to the top of the Mariner's stadium.  She was wearing so much clothing so when she fell off Mariner's stadium she landed on a cushion of her clothes.  Princess Ichiro fell  and the seven corndogs brought her to the Prince.  The Prince was so strong that Princess Ichiro and Ken Griffey Jr. got married.  A month later the evil coach got revenge by giving her a poison pickle she ate the pickle.  The seven cordog's were the first to witness the crime.  They thought of a good idea.  If each one of the seven corndog's donated a bite, she'll be cured!  You got it!  She's well again.  A couple days later they sued the evil coach.  They got 20 million dollars and they lived happily ever after! 

The Hawaiin Snow White - by Lauren

     Once upon a time there lived a beautiful girl named Kama.  She lived in a luxury resort in Maui.  Kama's mom died because a widow made a potion and her mom drank it and died.  Her father remarried an evil lady.  Her stepmother hated her because Kama was more beautiful then her.

     First, Kama was in her luxury resort in her old mom's bedroom.  Kama was very sad!  She missed her mom very much.  She wished she was not dead and that she didn't have a stepmother.  She went to her luxury pool to visit with her seven dolphins.  Maybe they would make her happier.

     Next, her step mother was wearing a disguise and sold Kama a poisoned coconut.  Kama ate is and fainted.  Kama's dolphins saved her after she fell into the pool.

     Then, her stepmother went to a closed coffee shop and made poisoned frozen yogurt.  Kama ordered an extra big amount, she ate it and fainted.  Luckily, the coffee shop was close enough to the lusxury pool so that the seven dolphins could save her!  They lectured her about buying things from strangers.

     Last, Kama went to a secret labratory and made a poisoned mango for her stepmother.  Her stepmother ate it, she died, she lost her power that made Kama's good mom disappear.  Kama's good mom came back alive and Kama lived happily ever after!!

Lady White - by Ryan

     Once upon a time there lived a Lady White beautiful as a swan and white as a pedal with her not cool dad and her evil mother in Hollywood.  One day the evil mother got a new brother named Justin Bieber.  Justin's hair was brown just like a golden bear.  The evil mother liked Justin better than Lady White.  She tried to kill Lady White with a tiny pencil in the bathroom but she ran away without a single trace.  After walking 7 cold days and nights she found a tiny house with 7 cowboys hobos in the bathroom washing themselves.  The hobos let her in.  Back at Lady Whites home sweet home the father died because of the rock and roll song Justin plays.  The End. 

Versions Of Snow White

This trimester we're learning about fairy tales!  Students read Snow White and are writing their own versions.  Here are some creative exerpts from their stories:

"Once upon a time in a city called Seattle and baby was born.  She was called Snow White.  A place not far away a witch lived.  She had a well that would tell her anything that she wanted to know." -  Justin

"That night after her step-mother had left, Strawberry fluffed herself with her big pink powder puff, tied the bow on her head and wished she had a carriage.  But, she did have the MAGIC BOW!" -  Mia

"The pot said in it's low voice, "Snowgoldstem has the most beautiful lips in the land".  The queen was so mad she yelled, "where would Snowgoldstem be?".  In the woods where you left her, but not for long."
- Jade

"Suddenly, the ground began to shake.  When she turned around she saw some dinosaurs charging at her!  Then, she jumped, did a flip and landed on the ground safely!" - Spencer

"Once upon a time in the Oak Wonder Forest, a little Eagle was born.  The mother noticed that the Eagle had a purple head.  Odd she thought!" - Ethan

"Once upon a time in Delhi there was a beautiful Indian girl with the eyes the color of melting chocolate and beautiful night black hair.  She wore a headwear made of flowers and it was her good luck charm.  She lived a happy life until one day......" - Partiv

"This is when the 7 Octopi appear.  With their x-ray vision they saw the stepmom drowning Sand Tan.  So the 7 Octopi went over there and with all their might they picked up Sand Tan and pushed on her stomache until she blew out the water which was poison." - Mark

"Now this mean stepmother was very MEAN.  Then the stepmother said, "I'll be back at 7:00 pm".  Then she left with a beautiful necklace....  - Steve

"Soon Brown Coconut came to a monkey.  The monkey thought Brown Coconut was very beautiful so he went to a nearby flower and picked it up for Brown Coconut.  Soon Brown Coconut came to a huge blue hut.  When she went inside she found....." - Baylee

How To Be A Good Third Grader

Here are some examples of expository writing from the class on "How To Be A Good Third Grader".

"A good third grader does not only do their work, they also don't COPY other people's work, they raise their hand in class and do not GOOF OFF!" - Fiona

"Now that I have given you such fantastic descriptions of how to be a good third grader.  I hope you follow my advice and good luck!" - Anonymous

"Do you want your teacher to like you?  Well, here's how!  Pay attention.  That way you know what to do.  You know how to do your work.  Last, use virtues!  That's the key to being a good third grader." - Anonymous

"Excellence is important because in the work excellence there is the word excel.  Next, be kind, dont yell at people, it hurts their feelings." - Parker

"You have to be nice, I will tell you how.  You have to keep your hands off other people.  Fill other people's buckets, and use virtues.  I hope you have learned how to be a good third grader." - Alex