Friday, April 15, 2011

Versions Of Snow White

This trimester we're learning about fairy tales!  Students read Snow White and are writing their own versions.  Here are some creative exerpts from their stories:

"Once upon a time in a city called Seattle and baby was born.  She was called Snow White.  A place not far away a witch lived.  She had a well that would tell her anything that she wanted to know." -  Justin

"That night after her step-mother had left, Strawberry fluffed herself with her big pink powder puff, tied the bow on her head and wished she had a carriage.  But, she did have the MAGIC BOW!" -  Mia

"The pot said in it's low voice, "Snowgoldstem has the most beautiful lips in the land".  The queen was so mad she yelled, "where would Snowgoldstem be?".  In the woods where you left her, but not for long."
- Jade

"Suddenly, the ground began to shake.  When she turned around she saw some dinosaurs charging at her!  Then, she jumped, did a flip and landed on the ground safely!" - Spencer

"Once upon a time in the Oak Wonder Forest, a little Eagle was born.  The mother noticed that the Eagle had a purple head.  Odd she thought!" - Ethan

"Once upon a time in Delhi there was a beautiful Indian girl with the eyes the color of melting chocolate and beautiful night black hair.  She wore a headwear made of flowers and it was her good luck charm.  She lived a happy life until one day......" - Partiv

"This is when the 7 Octopi appear.  With their x-ray vision they saw the stepmom drowning Sand Tan.  So the 7 Octopi went over there and with all their might they picked up Sand Tan and pushed on her stomache until she blew out the water which was poison." - Mark

"Now this mean stepmother was very MEAN.  Then the stepmother said, "I'll be back at 7:00 pm".  Then she left with a beautiful necklace....  - Steve

"Soon Brown Coconut came to a monkey.  The monkey thought Brown Coconut was very beautiful so he went to a nearby flower and picked it up for Brown Coconut.  Soon Brown Coconut came to a huge blue hut.  When she went inside she found....." - Baylee

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