Good writers use creative and original word choices to keep their readers interested! Here are some examples from our class:
"The tabasco made me on FIRE! It was so hot mmm......." - Anonymous
"The taste, oh how delicious! The taste of the nectarine explodes in my mouth when I take a bite!" - Lauren
"The dough slipped into my mouth with the chili sauce on it. Mmm....dumplings are the best food I ever tasted on earth!" - Ryan
"It is so tastey, kids LOVE it!. It sparks your taste buds, mmm it is so moist." - Tyler
"The cold, rich and creamy liquid slithers down my throat. Yum!" - Mia
"The reason my treat is tastey is because grapes are super sweet, super savory and have a smooth texture." - Baylee
"SO many different flavors! The tastey POPS in my mouth!" - Anonymous
"It is healthy because......people are more likely to eat fruit. (To the mom's:) also, you can sneak a little fruit in. It's that easy. It's that easy! And that's why it is healthy."
- Abe
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